The impact you need in a compact machine

[bridgetsum]

hey guys,

happy trucking!

I hope you'll be able to check out my article about compact machines, please do give me some feedback on what to improve. Don't forget to share this to your friends.

Thanks a lot!

https://business100blog.wordpress.com/2016/09/28/the-impact-you-need-in-a-compact-machine/

 

[Cmark]

I checked out your article. I would guess that English isn't your first language?

 

[melli]

Sorry, but disregarding the fact your plugging a machine (spamming - probably against the rules of this board), I'd 'focus' on your target audience. You've written a piece that is 90% fluff. The last paragraph is the only thing of importance. Engineering better machines is a given.
I click on link in article, and had to laugh when I saw the 'engine cowling' feature!
Ooooh. lol
Seriously, write an article about it's capabilities, new engineering (pump - why is it better?), and durability. As written, it sounds like a homework assignment.